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blossom into warriors
I love this collection. Every single piece said something to me. Information technology was confrontational, and empowering, and is everything I need at this moment.
This is a collection for anyone who has been downwardly trodden, and fabricated to roughshod less than they are. Its total of affirmation and encouragement that you are stronger than yous can imagine, and that you deserve to be you above all else.
Poetry is very personal. Some resonate, others don't. I tin can't tell you to read this. I cant t
broken girlsblossom into warriors
I love this collection. Every single piece said something to me. It was confrontational, and empowering, and is everything I need at this moment.
This is a collection for anyone who has been downward trodden, and made to fell less than they are. Its full of affirmation and encouragement that you lot are stronger than y'all tin imagine, and that you deserve to be you to a higher place all else.
Poesy is very personal. Some resonate, others don't. I can't tell you lot to read this. I deceit tell yous that you will love it. I tin can encourage you lot to read it, and brand your own judgements though.
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the girl who deserves the sun
is tired of being rained onthe daughter you don't capeesh
volition get tired of loving you lot*
she made oceans
with her tears
she used the heartache
every bit motivation to build
the boat
in hopes of sailing
far away from everything
and anybody
who hurt her*
girls like you have roses
inside of them
that are strong enough
to bloom through blizzards
And I'm non too glad it did.
I do appreciate the well-intentioned attempt to empower women somehow but... To sum up my d
Yes. This book has reached me.the girl who deserves the sunday
is tired of existence rained onthe girl you lot don't capeesh
will get tired of loving y'all*
she made oceans
with her tears
she used the heartache
as motivation to build
the gunkhole
in hopes of sailing
far away from everything
and anybody
who hurt her*
girls like you accept roses
within of them
that are potent enough
to bloom through blizzards
And I'm non too glad it did.
I practice appreciate the well-intentioned effort to empower women somehow just... To sum up my déjà vu: thoughts on these kinds of poesy collections in this review. 1 curious thing I didn't mention is that they all lack capitalization.
that's non working either
July 29, 18
* Likewise on my blog.
"Eventually the girl y'all took for granted volition take her love and give it to herself and someday someone better than you volition love her in all the ways you couldn't"
"This girl who deserves the dominicus is tired of beingness rained on the girl you don't appreciate will become tired of loving you"
"You should have loved her when she cared"
"One solar day y'all'll miss her one day you lot'll sympathize there will exist nights filled with darkness and yous will wait"
"The pain y'all feel wil
My personal favourites in this collection:"Eventually the daughter yous took for granted will take her beloved and give information technology to herself and anytime someone amend than you lot volition love her in all the means y'all couldn't"
"This girl who deserves the sun is tired of being rained on the girl y'all don't capeesh will get tired of loving you"
"You should accept loved her when she cared"
"1 24-hour interval yous'll miss her i solar day y'all'll empathize in that location will be nights filled with darkness and you lot will look"
"The pain y'all feel volition exist the aforementioned heartache y'all put her through and now you know you'll finally understand how much it hurts to desire someone who doesn't want you"
"You were the emptiness I felt you were darkness consuming me you lot were the matter keeping me from happiness"
"I was the ocean you wanted rivers I was the moon you chased the stars"
"The years I spent losing myself while trying to go on yous"
"You lot are more than just a torso count you are more than just a conquest you are more than just a name on the list of hearts they took advantage of and even after it happens y'all volition always be more than than they deserved"
"I used to wonder to myself how could y'all ever love a human being who barely made an effort but and then I witnessed your father as he barely tried and with tears in your eyes y'all said you loved him your father taught you how to dear men who reminded you of him"
"Foolish of me to believe that a dysfunctional family unit could role in a way that made me feel loved"
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for awhile, i did not bask reading sin'due south work.
afterward reading reading iv or his books i only enjoyed
2 (Whiskey, Words, and a Shovel I & Rest in the Mourning)
until today.
i think this volume chosen out lovers on their bullshit
and pointed out their own shortcomings.
how we requite then much and have nil to show for it
but sadness and self-incertitude all considering we wanted to observe
a home in someone else.
"i wish your desire to be happy somehow outweighed
your tolerance for t
for awhile, i did non enjoy reading sin'south work.
after reading reading four or his books i only enjoyed
ii (Whiskey, Words, and a Shovel I & Residuum in the Mourning)
until today.
i think this book called out lovers on their bullshit
and pointed out their own shortcomings.
how nosotros give so much and take nil to show for it
but sadness and self-incertitude all because nosotros wanted to detect
a home in someone else.
"i wish your desire to exist happy somehow outweighed
your tolerance for the heartache they've acquired you".
The numbers "121914" are non a poem. Neither is "i:11..." and I'thousand getting really tired of ~flowery~ short sentences beingness passed off as poetry.
As well, bounding main and moon metaphors belong to women, no
A couple of phrases in this book were well-said, but the residuum of it read like a moody teen who decided to publish her diary. I didn't realize until the end that this detail volume was written by a moody grown man (one who doesn't know the difference between its and it'south, but I digress). It was non good.The numbers "121914" are not a poem. Neither is "ane:11..." and I'm getting really tired of ~flowery~ short sentences being passed off as verse.
Also, bounding main and moon metaphors belong to women, non men. Ugh.
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Very much tailored for girls mail break upwards and so if that'due south non your situation, information technology will be tiresome. It was a scrap much at times in the sense of "you missed out on a great girl!!! permit'southward describe how great she is!!". But for the toll and for the page length I retrieve it did what it was trying to exercise.
What a neat drove for 99 cents???Very much tailored for girls post break up then if that'due south not your situation, it will be boring. It was a bit much at times in the sense of "you missed out on a nifty girl!!! let's describe how great she is!!". But for the price and for the page length I think it did what it was trying to practise.
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Mode too short and more on a very young adult female's level. Heard all the sentiments in the poetry before in much more creative ways.
anytime your soul will no longer linger
in places where pain exist
—
This poetry collection past far is my favourite 1 out of all R.H. Sin'southward works. The thing I loved well-nigh most information technology was the depth. Sure, it could have passed as some simple mail from Tumblr (as is usual in some of his pieces, to exist honest), but I found that I didn't mind that as much. The collection talked well-nigh love, heartache, self-love and everything that comes with tho
someday your soul will no longer linger
in places where hurting exist
—
This poetry collection by far is my favourite 1 out of all R.H. Sin's works. The thing I loved near about it was the depth. Sure, it could have passed as some uncomplicated mail service from Tumblr (as is usual in some of his pieces, to exist honest), but I found that I didn't listen that equally much. The collection talked about love, heartache, self-love and everything that comes with those things.
i was the sea
y'all wanted rivers
i was the moon
you lot chased the stars
This one had so much more of a poetic feeling to it. I was actually surprised, because R.H. Sin has a thing for random, quite pointless line breaks.
information technology's nearly equally if
her soul is a pack of wolves
she'southward brave, she's strong
she's unstoppable
It was as well empowering and meaningful, as expected of Sin.
girls similar you accept roses
inside of them
that are stiff enough
to bloom through blizzards
Initially, I rated this four stars when I wrote this in as RTC only at present, I'd forgotten why I didn't go for a full five, and I'm willing to overlook that because I but recollect how touching this was to read. There's nothing else for me to say, actually. Only that it was remarkable.
...more thanthe clouds dance around each other
like lovers fugitive the truth
There's no doubt to me that some of these pieces would serve as positive affidavit for many people (primarily women, it seems to exist the target of Sin's writing). Sin relies primarily on the pronoun "you" throughout the text, equally they're speaking direct to the person reading the book and it'due south Mostly in a positive calorie-free or every bit a ways of encouragement. One poem
A bit surprised to see this collection resting at a four.12 (equally of 12/nine/17), every bit I really wasn't able to find anything remarkable within it.There'southward no dubiousness to me that some of these pieces would serve as positive affirmation for many people (primarily women, it seems to be the target of Sin's writing). Sin relies primarily on the pronoun "you" throughout the text, as they're speaking directly to the person reading the book and it's Mostly in a positive calorie-free or as a means of encouragement. Ane poem reads "information technology is you who volition salvage yourself/considering this is what you've always done/because y'all are stiff enough/to exercise so". This repeats throughout, as the poems seem to take an urgency in tone in helping one out of an abusive relationship of sorts (this is afterward directly referenced much later on in the collection itself).
The ideas are there and are interesting...the language just feels painfully sophomoric throughout. I canis familiaris-eared a few that I particularly liked but past big it did aught for me. I would admittedly recommend it to someone in the midst of a difficult relationship state of affairs, however.
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with her tears
she used the heartache
equally motivation to build
the gunkhole
in hopes of sailing
far away from everything
and everyone
who hurt her
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your father
the first man you knew
the showtime man you lot'd love
one half of the reason why
you grew up so hard
so young and nonetheless
your heart began to ache
breaking into a million pieces
every bit you solitary would learn
to pick yourself upward
your father
the outset man to disappoint you
the first human to allow you down
the starting time homo to cause you lot
to lower y she made oceans
with her tears
she used the heartache
every bit motivation to build
the boat
in hopes of sailing
far away from everything
and everyone
who hurt her
******************************
your begetter
the first man you knew
the first human you'd love
one half of the reason why
you grew upwardly so hard
so young and yet
your heart began to ache
breaking into a meg pieces
as you alone would larn
to choice yourself upward
your father
the get-go human being to disappoint you
the offset man to let you down
the first man to crusade you
to lower your expectations
he loved you, yes
just i guess non enough
to protect yous
while y'all loved him enough
to expect past his failures
you'd proceed to have
his half ass efforts to honey you
you'd keep to take men
and their one-half donkey efforts to love you
your father
only present just plenty
for you to experience like you mattered
your lovers
just present enough
to fool you into thinking they cared
i used to wonder to myself
how could y'all ever love a man
who barely made an effort
but then i witnessed your male parent
equally he barely tried
and with tears in your eyes
you said you loved him
your father taught you
how to love men
who reminded y'all of him
finished this in about 25-xxx minutes. there were many cute moments and i bookmarked a few pages :)
His words are intoxicating but in a way that brightens my soul instead of darkening it.
I don't read poesy often plenty.
For me, it is one of the most cleansing things I tin read. It touches old wounds, only it likewise empowers me to heal.
R.H Sin is an incredible writer and even if you don't like poetry you should endeavour reading some of his work. I guarantee you will relate to it more than yous call up you volition.
Every fourth dimension I read poetry written by R.H. Sin, I think why he is one of my favorite writers.His words are intoxicating merely in a way that brightens my soul instead of darkening it.
I don't read poetry often enough.
For me, it is i of the most cleansing things I can read. It touches former wounds, but information technology besides empowers me to heal.
R.H Sin is an incredible writer and fifty-fifty if you don't like poetry you should try reading some of his work. I guarantee yous will relate to it more than y'all recollect you will.
I needed this.
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your eyes dancing
on this folio
y'all, the one who knows
how it feels
to have their middle
racing out of their chest
overrun with feet
drastic for relief
it is you lot who wants to be loved
understood for everything that you are
information technology is you lot, the one reading this
the ane who is close to tears
and so shut to breaking
it is you who will relieve yourself
because this is what you've always done
because you are strong enough
to do then'
Damn you, Reuben. You fifty-fifty write about the ane who is reading your work.
And h
your eyes dancing
on this folio
y'all, the one who knows
how information technology feels
to take their heart
racing out of their chest
overrun with anxiety
drastic for relief
it is you who wants to be loved
understood for everything that you are
it is yous, the one reading this
the one who is shut to tears
so close to breaking
it is you who will save yourself
because this is what yous've e'er washed
considering you are strong enough
to do so'
Damn you, Reuben. You even write nearly the 1 who is reading your work.
And how right yous are!
This one is 1 if his short poetry collections e'er. I wanted more.
As usual, he is talking about love, hurt and all that stupid realistic stuff which I can only feel only I really don't know if others feel that also.
I would like to say that not all women are injure. Non all women need to stay strong. Non all women needs constant attention. But bleh, I am a romantic!
Give it all to me💯
Mayhap something only rubs me the wrong way about a man projecting feelings on a adult female, especially about a failed human relationship. Information technology did not resonate with me.
I have read this book 3 times, and in all honesty, I didn't bask it very much. It was painfully sophomoric, redundant, lacked depth and poetic language. I personally wouldn't even consider xc% of this book every bit poetry, but rather full general statements/communication. For many of the poems, the vocabulary took abroad the quality of the poems and as a effect, the poems seemed underdeveloped and immature. Sin would use words similar "girls" instead of "women" or "man child/bad boy
ane.v/5 stars. I didn't like information technology.I have read this volume three times, and in all honesty, I didn't enjoy it very much. It was painfully sophomoric, redundant, lacked depth and poetic language. I personally wouldn't even consider ninety% of this book as poetry, merely rather general statements/advice. For many of the poems, the vocabulary took abroad the quality of the poems and equally a event, the poems seemed underdeveloped and young. Sin would apply words similar "girls" instead of "women" or "human being kid/bad boys" instead of "men". Often, I would find myself falling in dear with a "poem's" commencement, but the vocabulary killed the high past the time I reached the end. There were less than a handful of poems that had great poetic language, but a majority of the book is written in a very sophomoric, demotic way.
It's not the redundancy in this particular book that annoys me, merely rather the redundancy of the same idea in all of Sin's books. It's undeniable that Sin has a heart for women who are mistreated and I know the intentions of this volume are pure, but I would love to run into him explore a new platform. Upon reading his poems, I oftentimes feel as though he writes what he believes people want to hear. I often feel like he provides ideas that he knows will sell, which makes sense due to how rapidly he publishes books every and so months. But when I read poetry, I crave personal experience. I crave depth, honesty, vulnerability, and power. I crave learning about the similar monsters people are afraid of, but face it and plow into fine art. I feel every bit though Sin is always talking about someone else in his poems more than his own life, and ever making himself out to be the "good guy," but what nigh the mistakes he's fabricated in relationships? What about his own personal experiences? His own regrets in mistreating women in his past? His inspiration? etc. It just annoys me that Sin makes himself out to be this "adept guy" that every women should wait for. I feel like his poems are written for other people (or atleast he writes them that manner), when the best stories reflect our ain lives. Our stories take the power to change people. I badly desire him to provide something new for the audience or maybe even alter his audience and write to men near their heartbreaking behavior, instead of reaffirming women about their cocky-worth. Women have enough books by other women about self worth. Theres only so many things yous can say near the same topic. I believe he tin say more to men instead of, " you lot'll miss her when she's gone bro." I'm craving something new from Sin. I really am. not seeing his growth equally a writer. every volume is the same.
Information technology'southward also axiomatic that Sin cocky-published this book due to the amount of typos. It seemed very unprofessional. Though, I might fence, and say perchance the typos were intentional. Information technology seems as if the book was rushed (hence the title, "i hope this reaches her in time") and the writer didn't have fourth dimension for pocket-sized details. What refutes this theory, though, is the thought that the volume is supposed to exist a phone conversation. Besides, the theme of the book was besides inconsistent. Y'all find the reader reading poems directed to himself (one or twice), poems most the "girl" the author is speaking of, a few poems about the guy who broke her heart, and one poem about rape. It simply didn't flow well to fit the theme of phone conversation that was supposed to occur.
Above all, the message in this book is important and its undeniable that the intentions of the writer are pure. The volume wasn't written very well, but I did notice several poems that were nice enough to share. They weren't anything that struck my eye and introduced me to new ideas, but they did give a soft touch of affidavit that any reader could relate to. I would, though, recommend this volume to women who are in relationships they know they shouldn't exist in; relationships that cause them pain and unhappiness. I even so believe there are better books out there by women that take more depth on this topic, only this book is good in terms of short affirmations.
Equally with many contemporary poetry books, I may non have liked this volume every bit a whole but a did like it in pieces. Many of these just would simply look prissy as Instagram captions or tweets on Twitter. They are short and subtle. Other than that, this volume didn't accept plenty for me to want to go on the book on my shelf and ever read it once more.
My Favorite "Poem(s)":
"the heartache will teach y'all
then peace will fill you."
"girls like you have roses
inside of them
that are strong enough
to bloom through blizzards"
"I merely wish you wished for more
than what you lot've settled for"
" i wish your want
to be happy
somehow outweighed
your tolerance for the heartache
they've caused you lot"
Moreover, the premise of this poesy collection seems to be nothing more than than Squeamish Guy Wants Girl Who Loves "Bad Boys." Literally. The whole "she doesn't see me but she loves the wrong person" is the entire indicate of this whole drove of misguided poetry.
The author goes a step further and introduces daddy issues to the girl(southward) in question near the end. Also, a line seems to imply molestation. Basically, the author is looking for any excuse equally to why this girl doesn't honey him, abreast the obvious "she'due south only not that into you, bro."
2 pros for this collection (hence the two star rating):
ane. A very easy and very quick read.
2. There are a few pages of decent poetry.
That's information technology. The collection price me less than $iv dollars on Amazon; I do not feel robbed. Nevertheless, I do non discover this volume worthy of praise in any fashion. Being that this is my only exposure to this author, I have no plans to pursue any other of his works.
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Well, reading into a Lang Leav volume probably was a beginner's fault. My expectations were high and this drove could non live up to them. While I enjoyed some of the poems (I marked those that hit me- exactly 10), well-nigh of them were either unrelatable to me or lacked...how do I
This was the kickoff poesy volume I ever completed. I've never been a fan of poetry but afterwards I read a few pages of "sea of strangers" at a friend'south and another friend sent me this book as a nowadays, I thought I'd try.Well, reading into a Lang Leav book probably was a beginner'south mistake. My expectations were high and this collection could not live up to them. While I enjoyed some of the poems (I marked those that hit me- exactly x), most of them were either unrelatable to me or lacked...how do I say...soul? Other than the title scribes, they did not "attain me".
I like the simplistic cover pattern of this book and it was a fast read, so bonus points for that. I probably won't go dorsum to reread this but at least it didn't make me experience similar I was wasting my time.
All in all, it was a moderate collection, boilerplate, just okay.
When I manus this book over to my best friend I'll probably say the same thing the friend who gifted me this said:"I hope you'll enjoy this more than I did."
That being said, here's my favourite verse form that contains more just 1 sentence:
"in that location are so many wars going on at night
and so many hearts are fighting to survive without low-cal
the darkness contains everything we should forget
the regrets are magnified the night is plagued with what ifs"
your eyes dancing
on this page
you, the one who knows
how information technology feels
to have their heart
racing out ir their chest
overrun with anxiety
desperate for relief
It is you lot who wants to be loved
understood for everything that you are
it is yous, the one reading this
the 1 who is close to tears
so close to breaking
Information technology is you who will save yourself
because this is what you take always done
because you lot're strong enough to do then."
I finished this book in one sitting.
Some of the poems were of medium lengt
your optics dancing
on this page
you, the one who knows
how it feels
to accept their centre
racing out ir their chest
overrun with feet
desperate for relief
It is you who wants to be loved
understood for everything that yous are
it is you, the one reading this
the ane who is close to tears
so shut to breaking
It is you who will save yourself
because this is what you take ever done
because you're potent enough to do then."
I finished this book in i sitting.
Some of the poems were of medium length, while equally some pages were just filled with a single judgement eg. "𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙨𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙝𝙖𝙫𝙚 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙙 𝙝𝙚𝙧 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙨𝙝𝙚 𝙘𝙖𝙧𝙚𝙙" and "121914" was written on ane folio, which made no sense.
The writer kept irresolute his POVs, it would have been better if the volume had sections and so the author would alter his POV.
But if you've just started reading this "modern poetry" and so you should check out this volume, it might be fun for beginners.
One of my favorites is:
"You can miss people
and don't have to
want them dorsum
You tin can forgive people
merely y'all don't have to
give them second chances."
your optics dancing
on this folio
you, the ane who knows
how it feels
to have their eye
racing out of their breast
overrun with feet
desperate for relief
it is yous who wants to exist loved
understood for everything that you are
information technology is you, the i reading this
the ane who is close to tears...
This verse collection made me cry. This is not the commencement collection that impacted me, merely it is the beginning to make my eyes well with tears.
When I read the poem to a higher place, I lost it and my tears escaped.
I con
yous, reading thisyour eyes dancing
on this page
you, the one who knows
how it feels
to take their heart
racing out of their chest
overrun with feet
desperate for relief
information technology is you lot who wants to exist loved
understood for everything that you lot are
it is you, the one reading this
the 1 who is shut to tears...
This poetry collection made me weep. This is not the first collection that impacted me, simply it is the first to brand my eyes well with tears.
When I read the poem higher up, I lost it and my tears escaped.
I connected with EVERY poem. ALL of them. I felt similar r.h.Sin understood me and I felt like he was talking to me. My heart felt so heavy, I felt total of emotions, like I was going to explode. I tin can't explicate the feeling...you have to feel it yourself.
This will forever be my favourite collection. I'm still trying to hold back tears. These words are so powerful and I feel them entwining with my soul.
This is my story. Thanks r.h.Sin.
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This was okay i guess , but after some pages it just felt flat for me 🤷🏼♀️
I bought this book because it was .99 cents and a short read. After the offset few pages it had me in tears. Longing for someone is not a good feeling only being hopeful is, and this book is simply that.
I don't read poetryI bought this volume because it was .99 cents and a short read. Afterward the offset few pages it had me in tears. Longing for someone is not a good feeling merely existence hopeful is, and this book is just that.
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